Comments on Thriller Pitch

one comment we received whist pitching our thriller post was where our location for the house we are going to set our opening sequence, we have decided that we are going to set the house at Olivia's house but we need a ask permission from her family first to ensure we can use her house. another comment we got was where we are going to locate the face off between the dad and the kidnapper, we came to the conclusion that we are going to use grande arcade car park in town for this, because towards late evening it is empty and it will be quite for the ambient sounds to be emphasized to create a eary atmosphere. also we would need to seek permission from the security gaurds. another comment we got was how we are going to show the audience clearly that the dad is going into a dream, we are going to use a transition which will make it clear and easy for the audience to understand that he is going into a dream. also we are going to have ask a child to play a character which we will need to ask permission from their parents for them to be in our opening sequence